Once again, I am delighted to share a Golden Chapter Review. When Jessie Cahalin from Books in my Handbag invited me to visit her Handbag Gallery and indulge my love of books, she told me that “selecting books is a voyage of discovery for intrepid readers.” You can read more about Golden Chapter Reviews here.
We wanted to shine the spotlight on books and encourage readers to not only select and read a book from the Handbag Gallery, but to also discuss and comment about the book with us.
It’s a privilege for me to collaborate with Jessie on this First Chapter Review feature. She is a compelling writer and a positive voice on social media as she encourages authors, readers, and all book lovers. Thanks also to our talented authors for participating!
I’ve got a golden handbag
And with a golden handbag…
it’s a golden day…
to read…
The Saturday Club
Patricia Feinberg Stoner
Golden Short Story from a Collection, Tales from the Pays d’Oc
I am a lifelong resident of what I jokingly refer to as “tropical Ohio”, a border state between the east and mid-west states of the US. I know about covered bridges and cornfields, county fairs and factories. I have travelled around the US and to a few places around the world. Still, when I think of Europe, I tend to categorize it as a land of fairy tales and famous monuments.
But thanks to books and authors, I have become better acquainted with the heartbeat of different areas of the countries “across the pond”. “Merci” to the many talented writers who have introduced me to Provence, Normandy, Auvergne and now…Occitanie and Languedoc.
Patricia Feinberg Stoner’s latest book, a collection of short stories, is the latest gold I have found in my Golden Handbag. Actually, her book is two treasures- a treasure for readers and a treasure for writers.
I read the first short story in the book and it is the establishing shot for the entire collection. The chapter begins with a “wide shot” as the author shows us a view of St. Remy des Cevenes as it nestles beneath the mountains and bakes under the summer sun of the Languedoc. From there, the writer’s “camera” moves a bit closer to show usLa rue du quatorze juillet, the home of the Saturday market.
The author immerses us in the market as we slowly walk up the steep street. We pass stalls of fruits and vegetables, racks of gaudy clothing, and friperie, then olives and goat cheese until we arrive at Le Café d l’Ane.
As we settle on the shady terrace of the cafe, we watch as members of the Saturday Club gather- the sophisticates of St. Remy and their country cousins. Friends, couples, expats, even a dog named Useless, shout friendly greetings, and share jokes and gibes as they sit near us. The last to arrive is Mirjam who is breathless with excitement. “You’ll never believe what I’ve just seen…” she begins. And with that, we have arrived and become welcomed participants, eager for the next story in this gem of a book.
This first short story is a gift for readers, because it contains all the elements we love- an interesting place that may be new to some of us, charming descriptions, vibrant characters, plus the promise of many more fascinating tales. And for writers the treasure is even more valuable because the author has done something rather unusual.
She has written the first story (I don’t know about the rest of the book) in the second person, not generally used as a point of view in fiction. “…the rich aromas of fruits and vegetables laid out for your temptation.”
What does this do for us? It puts us, the readers, in the story, just as if we were another member of the Saturday Club. First or third person POV is more typical, but as you read this story you will see that using the second person is quite engaging. That, and the author’s ability to choose powerful and descriptive words slows the pace for us, so we feel as if we truly are walking up the street and relaxing at the cafe. Well done! Tres bien fait!
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Happy Reading and Stay Golden!
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Happy Reading and Stay Golden!
Jena C. Henry
I grew up thinking I was going to follow in my mother’s footsteps and go on the stage, but there was one huge obstacle to this plan: I had zero talent for acting. The only thing I could do was write, so after a spell on the university newspaper it seemed a logical step to go into journalism. I’ve been a reporter (a terrible one), a feature writer, an advertising copywriter and a publicist to earn my pennies, and a writer of short stories and comic verse for fun.
In the 80s I worked in an advertising agency alongside the now-renowned Anthony Horowitz. We were massively under-employed: he whiled away the hours in writing and submitting screenplays, I scribbled comic verses about cats, which led to my first collection, Paw Prints in the Butter.
In 2003 my husband and I became accidental expatriates in France when we were adopted by a small brown and white dog and spent four years living in a village in the Languedoc. A series of articles for French Property News morphed into my second book, At Home in the Pays d’Oc, which won the One Stop Fiction Five-Star Book Award.
Now back in England I live in the lovely village of Rustington on Sea. You’ll find me at Amazon https://www.amazon.co.uk/-/e/B00O36LKRE and I’m also on Facebook (Paw Prints in the Butter) and on Twitter @perdisma. If you fancy a lot of silliness and a few sobering thoughts, do visit my blog: http://www.paw-prints-in-the-butter.com
I am a writer, blogger, book reviewer, and bon vivant and encourager. I have lived my entire life in Tropical Ohio. My goal is to make friends with everyone in the world. I wrote a fiction series, The Golden Age of Charli, that presents the problems and praises, and the love and laughter of family life and retirement. My passions are blogging, reading and reviewing, and writing. My life is a WIP.
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